INTEGRATION

Integrate each word in the action narrative into the story. Make it advance the plot or expand character (see Richard Walter on action). Illuminating the theme is important, too, but should be kept to a minimum. Eliminate all words that exist solely for the purpose of creating atmosphere. You must convince readers every word is there for a reason, or they will start to skim.

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